Write a catchy dreamy poetic lyrical song about rain on the window as a metaphor for peer pressure, never use the term peer pressure, avoid generic or cliche, never use cliche, find heart in simple things, use clever turns of phrase.

🎵 Dreamy Poetic Song Using Rain on the Window as a Metaphor for Social Conformity

(Prompt v2 – with Enhanced Lyrical Control)

🪞 THEME & METAPHOR

• Use rain on the window as a central metaphor.

• Represents quiet social pressure to conform — emotional drift, quiet resistance, longing for autonomy.

• Do not mention “peer pressure” or similar terms.

• Explore internal conflict without overt explanation.

🎨 STYLE & TONE

• Dreamy, slightly melancholic, like a slow indie ballad or alt-folk lullaby.

• Poetic, musical, subtle.

• Use simple phrases with emotional depth, not academic or overly abstract.

• Reference tone: Phoebe Bridgers, Leif Vollebekk, Big Thief.

🧍 CHARACTER SCENES (2x Verses)

• Two verses, each 8+ lines.

• Each verse paints a clear, emotionally resonant scene with a specific character, name, and place.

• Scenes must show tension between inner self and outer pressure.

• Include mundane but meaningful details (e.g., bus ride, classroom lights, group text pings).

• No generic or faceless experiences.

✍️ COMPOSITION DETAILS

• Avoid clichés at all costs. Use fresh imagery and inventive phrasing.

• Use natural rhythm and internal rhyme where possible.

• Include moments of clever wordplay or double meaning, but keep them grounded in emotion.

• Allow for moments of silence, hesitations, or breaks in flow — as if sung by someone thinking while they sing.

🎭 LYRICAL STRUCTURE CONTROLS

✅ ANAPHORA (Optional Section Use)

• Use anaphora (repeating the first few words of each line) in one verse or bridge.

• Repetition should add emotional momentum, not filler.

• Example (don’t copy):

  • I watch the steam rise

  • I watch them all smile

  • I watch myself quiet

✅ INTERNAL RHYME

• Subtly integrate internal rhyme for musicality and cleverness.

• Keep it smooth — avoid sounding like a rap.

• Example:

  • “Her breath on the glass / fades fast with the class.”

✅ LIST-LIKE VERSES

• One verse can follow a list-style format, using poetic logic rather than linear narrative.

• Each line should contribute a new layer or twist.

• Example (don’t copy):

  • A note in a locker, a seat by the door / A silence too heavy, a laugh that’s a chore…

🔁 REPETITION & MOTIF

• Rain or windows should recur in each section, with evolving emotional tone.

• Use metaphor progression:

  • From curiosity → discomfort → reflection → resistance

• You may return to a central image or phrase (e.g., “the rain draws a line”) in chorus or outro.

🧭 PROGRESSION & CONTRAST

• The second verse should shift perspective slightly:

  • Different character, or same character at a later emotional moment.

  • Reveal growth, fatigue, decision, or clarity.

• Chorus should contrast the verses:

  • Verses = concrete, narrative

  • Chorus = reflective, metaphorical

✅ STRUCTURE SUMMARY

• Verse 1 (8+ lines): Detailed character scene

• Chorus: Reflective, metaphor-rich, musical

• Verse 2 (8+ lines): New character or evolved moment

• Optional Bridge: Stylistic variation (anaphora or spoken-feeling)

• Outro: Repeat central metaphor or offer emotional closure